Thursday, June 23, 2016

Duck In The Long Grass Critque

I took this photo on a walk one morning some time ago. I was so excited how close this mama duck let me approach. I then submitted it to a photo critique website and I got back some helpful hints. First I had to overcome the fear of encountering trolls. But it was overall a very helpful experience.


I noticed you said you were a beginner in another comment. There is a rule of thumb that your shutter speed should be at least your focal length. Some people use 2x focal length (everyone has different hands/stability).
So since this was shot at 200mm, your shutter should be at least 1/200s if not 1/400s. You could nudge the ISO up to compensate for the reduced exposure. Hope it helps! Personally I think it's a great photo, and keep shooting!!
Nina edit: instead of boosting ISO to compensate for increasing the shutter speed, using a wider aperture (smaller F-stop number) may be preferable.

I personally would stop down a little, because some of the highlights look ever so slightly washed out, and perhaps have used a longer lens, but overall everything looks fairly natural.
This is a pretty good photo, especially if you are an amateur photographer. I would say that you should stick with it, and you'll only get better. Nature Photography is extremely difficult, and I highly respect you for going for it. I personally do not have the patience.


I like it - IMO though, I would remove the stem coming up the duck's neck and clean up the blue back drop and remove some of those stray leaves at the edges of the photo. It'll have a nicer appeal on the eyes and won't appear to be too busy.  


I'm getting sick of seeing the same damn advice to straight up Photoshop doctor, cut, and splice every photo posted here so that there isn't a stray or slightly distracting (or interesting) element to it. This is great advice if you want to produce generic greeting card "photos", but this isn't for fashion magazine portrait. It's a picture of a duck in grass, advising to remove the grass is asinine. It's quickly goes from a cool photo of "duck in grass" to "uninspired preconception of what I think a duck in grass should be".


Overall it was a consistent bump up the shutter speed. 
I was at 100 ISO, F/8 Shutter Speed 1/160 and at 200mm

So since I was at 200mm I needed to be at least at 1/200 if not 1/400. 
Another lesson learned!

Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Auto Focus Struggles


Just looking at it, it's not a bad shot.
I had no idea what type of bird it was at the time. But apparently it's a Sora Rail. They are apparently pretty secretive so I had no idea I was getting really luck at the time, especially with two little kids as well.

BUT the shot to me is on the rubbish side of things. The stinking eyes are not in focus. They are slightly blurry. The main body of the bird is clear.

So my next task is to find out how to make sure the eyes come into focus every time. 

But here are some I got from the same day.


Again, those blasted eyes aren't as crisp and clear as they should be


This one is my favorite I think.

I've been practicing with my 55mm-200mm lens. I'm already drooling over a 500mm-1000mm lens. But that one is only manual focus so that's going to be a little ways off before I can do that I think.

Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Easter Portraits

This Easter I tried to get portraits of family at Easter. 
Fortunately most of them allowed me too. 
Unfortunately the weather didn't cooperate that much the whole weekend.



This one I should have changed to a different lens. I was using the prime lens. Should have switched.




This time I put the camera in Aperture priority mode and let the camera figure it all out. The prime lens is perfect for portraits! It really does a great job.  However for other shots like I mentioned before not as good as another lens would be. At least that's what I'm figuring.

Monday, March 14, 2016

Weekend Assignment 08


Get the proper exposure of the sky.

This one took a little while for me to get done. I wanted to wait until the weather was a little bit decent. But that never came. I went out while it was overcast. I had the directions and parameters written down on a post it note to reference. Then after the first photo I looked down into the camera bag and the post it note was gone. The wind had taken it away. So I had to wing it. and winged it badly I did. I botched it. 



They just came out..blah

I went out again and this time it was sunny.


So I need to work on the overcast obviously. 
Teacher's feedbackw as 
"Looks Good!"

Sunday, February 28, 2016

Weekend Assignment Review

hehe, looks nice :-) good job on using the paper and cellphone for creative lighting!
 
I told him the same thing about how badly I do at stars. 
Scoooore! Not one bad thing about them this time!
Victory is mine!!

Saturday, February 27, 2016

Weekend Assignment 07

So this assignment was so neat! I'm just going to link it here so you can see the amazing example they provided. 

I was aiming for a elephant to be shooting stars out if it's trunk. I kinda got it. But I stink at drawing stars as it is. I really don't know how I haven't gained that life skill. Really I have no idea. Then cutting it out, oh boy. But for how bad I am at that, I'm not dejected in how things turned out. 

Diffused cell phone light through white construction paper

Cell phone light no diffuser

Cell phone light diffused through green construction paper

This assignment was fun! I haven't gotten any feedback since I just submitted it. I might hear something tomorrow.

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Weekend Assignment 6

This weekend assignment was light painting and using slower shutter speeds. :(
I suuuuck!



 Didn't help there were 35MPH winds outside.